Score: 8

"Okay"

submission: MTC: Plane Blastin'!

date: June 7, 2008

I liked the game I mean it looked great and the audio was just terrific. But I found it to be tooglitchy for me. For example when I was shooting planes out of the sky I kept on seeing a planing shimmering in and out of the top right of the screen. I also thought it was too simple a premis to. I mean I liked the game and all, but I had gotten bored after about five minutes or so. Other than that I can not really find any other cons for this game I can't believe the score is so low. Just work on the glitches and I'm sure it will do better.

Best of luck,

DeLuca2400

Score: 7

"Liked it"

submission: Mouris teh Moose

date: June 7, 2008

I liked the movie. I found it very funny and entertaining to watch, but I had some problems with your Flash animation. First of all, I thought you should have added more animations in your moving because it looked like cardboard ctouts talking. Another thing I think you should fix is that you need to make the color a little less plain. Also, I think you should have used lip syncing for the characters and I thought the ausio could have been a litte bit clearer.I mean I liked it , but I think you just need to tweak it up a little bit more and then you will have a great Flash animation. Hope this movie does well.

Best of luck,

DeLuca2400

Score: 6

"Looks promising"

submission: Sunraw Player Beta

date: June 7, 2008

I like the idea of having a game and and a animation to be on the same submission, but you don't have much that I see. I mean it's a good idea and all but I believe you didn't have enough components to exexute this game/animation and submitt it. I did think the soundtrack option was pretty good. I do think you need to add more song for it though. I also found that the main menu was pretty plain in color and I hope you try to fix those problems all and all I think it's a good idea and I hope you work on it. Oh and please don't make a dressup I'd hate to see another one on this website. Try making somethong a little more challenging like a space shooter or something else. I only wish you best of luck on your present and future projects.

hope I helped,

DeLuca2400

Score: 7

"Okay"

submission: Mr. Shuster

date: June 5, 2008

I liked the game, but there really wasn't much to do. I found it to be too plain in design and I also found the sound effects a little too annoying. Also I found it to be hard because every time I jumped I lost health also I thought the game was a little too boring. I think you should add some enemies and some weapons or some powerups like a jet pack or something. I believe this game has some potential I mean I liked your general concept of a spaceman who has to find fuel to get back home safely, but I think your game need a little oomph. Also did you submit this game before it looks really familar?

Score: 9

"Loved it"

submission: Kid Bear

date: June 5, 2008

I liked the stop motion type animations. I can tell you took your time to create this great movie. It was really artsy and I like how you had your own unique style of the characters. I also how there wasn't much color and how you still managed to create such great backgrounds. I also liked how the music flowed so well with the movie. The only problems I had was that it was glitchy but you had a good reason for that. Also I thought the volume was a little too low, I mean I had to turn it up about three quarters of a way up to hear it. I don't know if it's my speakers though. I hope you get front page for this, usually Newgrounds puts comedic movies or violent , but I think if they see this they are going to have to put it on the front page.

Best of luck,

DeLuca2400

Score: 5

"Okay for a first try, but"

submission: ...The Maze Game...

date: June 4, 2008

I thought you could have done better on the presentation of your game. I mean some of the lines of the maze were not straightend or smothend out and I thought the colors were too plain and I so I aslo thought you could have added some music or some sound effects. I also found some glitches in the game too, and I think you should fix those. I mean the maze game is just above the mouse avoider game in means of coding but it was a good atempt. I think it was okay, not front page material but you did good.

Best of luck,

DeLuca2400

Score: 6

"Needs improvement"

submission: Supa Mario Brudas.

date: June 3, 2008

I liked the movie very much and I found it very funny, but there are some things you need to improve on. For one you could've added sound effects or some music. Though I liked how you incorporated not having sound in the movie and it being the main plot of finding a coin for sound, but you still need it. Second, you need to add a background to the movie and the animations were too stiff and you need to add depth to the movie. I hope you listen to my suggestions and actually learn from your mistakes and then you'll make a great flash movie.

Best of luck,

DeLuca2400

Score: 6

"Pretty good"

submission: Sprite Wars: Good Vs Evil

date: June 3, 2008

I usually don't like sprite movies but this was pretty good. I liked the different charcters used and the sound effects too were really well in sync with the actions of the characters. I also enjoyed the backgrounds too. The downside of it was that it was a sprite film and you didn't really create any of this besides the text boxes. Speaking of those text boxes, they took me away from the movie. I didn't mind the ones in the beginning, but the ones with Sonic and Knuckles I thoght were a bad idea. Another suggesion I have is to add some music too.

Hope I helped,

DeLuca2400

Score: 8

"Entertaining"

submission: Ways to kill a Stickman

date: June 2, 2008

I liked the simplistic/crappy design of the game. I found it to be very hilarious and it was cool. Some problems of the game that I found were that the animations all be it simplistic and I liked, it was bad I mean the animals looked pretty bad and they had no depth at allalso I believe you should've put a background in the game it would have made it looked better. Plus you should add a running off a cliff animation or a car crash because I believe you need these to show off your animating skills. Hope I helped.

Best of luck,

DeLuca2400

Score: 7

"I liked it"

submission: Legend of Ron

date: June 2, 2008

I like it but I didn't like the backgrounds, you only have one attack, I didn't like how when you killed an enemy it just dissapeers. Other than that you have a pretty solid platformer and I hope you listen to some of my suggestions and use the accordingly.

Best of luck,

DeLuca2400