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Latest Flash Reviews
I liked the game I mean it looked great and the audio was just terrific. But I found it to be tooglitchy for me. For example when I was shooting planes out of the sky I kept on seeing a planing shimmering in and out of the top right of the screen. I also thought it was too simple a premis to. I mean I liked the game and all, but I had gotten bored after about five minutes or so. Other than that I can not really find any other cons for this game I can't believe the score is so low. Just work on the glitches and I'm sure it will do better.
Best of luck,
DeLuca2400
Author's Response:
Thanks.
I'll try.
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I liked the movie. I found it very funny and entertaining to watch, but I had some problems with your Flash animation. First of all, I thought you should have added more animations in your moving because it looked like cardboard ctouts talking. Another thing I think you should fix is that you need to make the color a little less plain. Also, I think you should have used lip syncing for the characters and I thought the ausio could have been a litte bit clearer.I mean I liked it , but I think you just need to tweak it up a little bit more and then you will have a great Flash animation. Hope this movie does well.
Best of luck,
DeLuca2400
Author's Response:
i <3 u!
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I like the idea of having a game and and a animation to be on the same submission, but you don't have much that I see. I mean it's a good idea and all but I believe you didn't have enough components to exexute this game/animation and submitt it. I did think the soundtrack option was pretty good. I do think you need to add more song for it though. I also found that the main menu was pretty plain in color and I hope you try to fix those problems all and all I think it's a good idea and I hope you work on it. Oh and please don't make a dressup I'd hate to see another one on this website. Try making somethong a little more challenging like a space shooter or something else. I only wish you best of luck on your present and future projects.
hope I helped,
DeLuca2400
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I'll keep that in mind.
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Latest Audio Reviews
Now I'm no piano player and I only know a little bit about Mozat, Beethoven, and Chopin, but I know good music when I hear it. I liked the general flow and I found it to peaceful and moving. I loved the simplistic style you had with just the piano playing. Sometimes when you add something it just takes away from the song. I also can't believe you wrote this all by yourself. I only wish you the best of luck on your future projects.
Hope I helped,
DeLuca2400
Author's Response:
Thanks for the nice review, i much enjoyed reading it.
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i liked the song it did have a horror/ Science Fiction sound to it. I can see it it like in some Flash movies or games most notably the visitor. Some cons is that it did get a little repetetive, but overall I thought you did a good job and hope this does well. I wish you the best of luck on all of your future projects and have a nice day.
Hope I helped,
DeLuca2400
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I thought it was great It was smooth and pretty simple. It sounded like Nirvana mashed up with Know how by Young MC with the 70'slike guitar like Shaft or something. I liked the steady beat to it and it really flowed well. The only problem I had was that it was repetetive and it was a little to short.
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DeLuca2400
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it dosen't go anywhere, Does it...
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